ok that took forever +4. i want to try and complete this comic one page a day. i wont spend as much time on the next pages so i hope they turn out ok

well since my first and second pages turned out quite disastrous i figure spending time figureing out compositions and placement of stuff is a much better idea than starting off spending hours detailing things that  i might not even use. the black stuff is pretty lame i think its the wrinkles from having my hand resting on the paper. 

i dont know how this took like 4 hours

I definitely need to have the first frame reach to the end of the page, and i dont thingk floating text is legit, so ill have to do thos world bubble things which i think will make it like a comic which would be neat, uh and i think for the narration parts i should do do the overlappy scroll things

I got the basis for my story down, which I think would be a cool comic/ story board. but it took me forever to make this, and I've got like 10 more pages to do to complete it. so its safe to say i wont have the storyboard completed by monday but ill try to get as much done as i can. Here is what ive done for the first page, the lines are very light so i darkened it in photoshop so its visible, i want to get a few critiques before solidifying the lines and details. now to start the second page...

this is some of the more completed stuff. I want to make concept art that displays an epic fantasy world with characters who are awesome and beasts that  are mighty, but it is difficult when it takes me like 4 hours to draw a dude.  I want to finish these up and some others, but i have to present a storyboard on monday.  its difficult to come up with without a solid plot or story, im thinking along the lines of companions who battle legendary beasts.

Some stuff from previous projects, I'm at school right now and have yet to scan any of my new stuff, but it is something so I can get to harassing people to look at it.